Wednesday 3 April 2013

Carpe Diem: Gemini


Together they make one
umbilical connection
power of the twins

Power of the twins
Cain and Abel legacy
divided we fall

21 comments:

  1. This is lovely... I'm seeing a pattern with tragic twins from a number of our participants. :-)
    Eliz

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    1. Yes the cain and bel came up right way for me when i saw this prompt

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  2. Divided we fall ... so true !!!

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    1. every time - especially against ourselves

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  3. Wonderful cascade haiku Sam. Thank you for sharing.

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    1. Thanks Kris. This was a tough onc for me. I really enjy your writing each day thank you for taing the time to put that together for us :)

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  4. divided 'we' fall - are you a twin?

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    1. Are you asking me
      to explain my art to you?
      it is what it is

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  5. wonderful transitory migration (yes, you moved me!) from being connected in power versus the fall of division.

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    1. Transitory migration :) that makes me a syllable engineer.

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  6. yes there is entropy in this pair
    moving from order to disorder
    and we all end up as dust

    JzB

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    1. all end up as dust
      and maybe a good dust up
      with some willing twins

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    2. that's a trophy not entophy

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  7. I think these prompts are difficult, but you have nailed this one...beautifully written with a punch...

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    1. Yes I find the prompt dificult if you aren't close t osomeone woh is that sign. Thnks for the complement..

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  8. Murder She Wrote (i like Snoopy wall paper:)

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    1. Yes the snoopy wall paper make me happy :)

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