Wednesday 24 April 2013

Haiku Heights: Volcano



beneath the surface
 pressure slowly building
volcano erupts

Inspired by the theme at

National Poetry Month

7 comments:

  1. There is peace after the eruption but lying dormant is unsettled and dangerous!!

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  2. Loved the way you related the emotion with volcano! Beautiful haiku :)

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  3. I have experienced this! Great haiku, great metaphor

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  4. true! simple and wonderfully describes the emotional volcano that we all let grow inside ourselves!

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  5. haha ...you writing from experience being in close proximity to a volcano :)

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  6. holding things in can create a deadly explosion....

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