Saturday, 20 April 2013

Haiku Heights: Tsunami



A break from haiku
creativity rushes
like a tsunami

Like a tsunami
advancing and receding 
equal in power 

Equal in power
the lonely tear of a child
and a tsunami


Inspired by the theme at

National Poetry Month


19 comments:

  1. I wish I was disciplined enough to write haiku's as well as you do.

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    1. I don't kw if it's discipline as much as it suits my short attention span...

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  2. awww love that one ..so true ..it hurts so much to see your child hurt & crying ...awesome job :)

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  3. A child's tears of loneliness can indeed be as heartbreaking as a tsunami !

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  4. Nice cascade from the huge overwhelming rain to the tears of a child.

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  5. Great haiku. Even a lonely tear creating tsunami

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  6. Love this tsunami of creativity!! The break really rejuvenates the mind, and the advancing and receding keeps such a healthy balance!!

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    1. Yes a brak is good for the spirit.

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  7. A tsunami of creativity.. Thats nice! And we all crave for that, right...

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  8. Great take on the prompt. The last one is so poignant

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  9. This is so beautifully written.

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