Friday, 31 May 2013

Goodbye Cruel Girl



This will be my last Trifextra at the Trifecta Writing Challenge. I'm moving on or at least taking a break.  It's been a slice and hope to see y'all around.

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There was elegance to breaking up where we’d first kissed.

Fucking my best friend was not elegant.

Nor was pushing her off the Edge.

Which I did.

I really was never that Elegant.


24 comments:

  1. No, no, that's rather inelegant indeed.

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    1. Wait, I just read you're leaving???? Ah dude, you are going to be missed ;__;

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    2. I will pop by to visit just going to concentrate on my Novel project and some e-pub.

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  2. We're sad to see you go, Sam. Good luck with your future work. We'll miss you and we'll be here should you want to pop back in for a hello.

    Thank you for linking up.

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    1. Yes thanks. It's been great I will see you guys around :)

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  3. A strong and eclectic finish to your Trifecta participation. Very best with your novel and other writings.

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    1. THanks Jo-anne I wil be around :)

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  4. Harsh! But so well-written, as always!

    I'll miss you too, but now I'm looking forward to seeing the bigger projects you're working on! Good luck!

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    1. thank sussanne I will be blogging still just refocussing

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  5. Haha! I guess not! :D Nicely imagined! :D

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  6. Not elegant, but straightforward, for sure!

    Dang, I hope you swing by Trifecta now and again. You are one of my favorites lately!

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    1. Ys I will keep an eye in you guys. WIll still be posting but mostly potry though other sites that focus on poetry.

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  7. So you're pushing Trifecta off the Edge.. at least for a time. Strong finish. I'll certainly stop by to read your poetry if you post any. Cheers, Sam!

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    1. Yes I will be posting lots of poetry thanks Steph . Cheers

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  8. Aww Sam... I really enjoy reading all the stuff you write... A definite 'Edge' to it all... Will miss you on Trifecta. Hope to catch your posts soon... Wherever they are :)

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  9. Ha. There's so much in that phrase: "Which I did."
    ;)

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  10. why be elegant? -- sad to see you away .. might I see you at other prompts? dVerse for instance?

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  11. I would call that a bad boy or should I say bad girl. Best wishes with your novel.

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  12. That is rather harsh! Sorry to see you'll be leaving Trifecta. Hope you'll visit once in a while - best of luck on your novel!

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