Thursday 12 September 2013

Jazz Poetry

a-one-and-a-two ...
and-a-one-two-three-four

tss-tka-tss-tka-tss-tka
boomboom-boomboom
boomboom-boomboom

bebopbeopindopoptoptop
tiptopspidleyopdopspeedop

light takes a slight break
high stakes step lightly as the
light breaks on streetscapes
high as kites we skate home
where we sip soft kisses
love spills and slips from lips
we sink into the sofa cushions
if you could only feel me now.

tss-tka-tss-tka-tss-tka
boomboom-boomboom

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D'verse has us doing Jazz Poetry which I only kind of get.













12 comments:

  1. love the play with sounds...and cool wordplay and allits as well..
    light takes a slight break
    high stakes step lightly as the
    light breaks on streetscapes.... ha..i have a tongue in my knot after reading this....very, very cool...

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  2. You only half get it?!? I love the onomatopoeia - unpronounceable but playable in music...

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  3. Pure slam poetry. High (hat) five to you!

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  4. You set up the rhythm in the opening lines ~ I am loving the sounds and then the sinking into cushions ~ I say, go with the flow, smiles ~

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  5. ha. nice scat that breaks into a wicked pace in the true stanza....the last line on feeling me now hints at a much larger story to me....

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  6. onomatopoeia
    See what you made me do? I had to yet again check the spelling of this devilish word :-)
    Nice concoction. And me too: not quite get it.

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  7. Wonderful sound effects made me experience your words! You have created some 'cool jazz,' Sam!

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  8. Hey you made it work - those sounds, that magic - it's love and all good. Absolutely your kind (and my kind) of JAZZ!

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  9. Ah.. that play... would love to hear you sing it ... cool

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