tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post2470313506988028443..comments2023-12-17T02:18:16.752-08:00Comments on Collateral Damn-Edge - The Creative Writing of Sam Edge: Jazz Poetry Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-87893449143661712992013-09-13T16:43:08.177-07:002013-09-13T16:43:08.177-07:00Your jazz poem rocks! :-DYour jazz poem rocks! :-DMystic_Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00099062213372011260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-57038344366460818922013-09-13T13:20:21.780-07:002013-09-13T13:20:21.780-07:00Very cool. Love the opening.Very cool. Love the opening.chamomile seahttp://chamomilesea.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-48968891551271005622013-09-13T10:55:41.335-07:002013-09-13T10:55:41.335-07:00Ah.. that play... would love to hear you sing it ....Ah.. that play... would love to hear you sing it ... cool brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-86099903237195004822013-09-13T09:43:51.067-07:002013-09-13T09:43:51.067-07:00Hey you made it work - those sounds, that magic - ...Hey you made it work - those sounds, that magic - it's love and all good. Absolutely your kind (and my kind) of JAZZ!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-88607737959144614422013-09-13T05:20:41.738-07:002013-09-13T05:20:41.738-07:00Wonderful sound effects made me experience your wo...Wonderful sound effects made me experience your words! You have created some 'cool jazz,' Sam!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-63140934795127001982013-09-13T04:58:43.240-07:002013-09-13T04:58:43.240-07:00Ella could scat it. Love this!Ella could scat it. Love this!Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-23454022251525949002013-09-13T04:18:18.482-07:002013-09-13T04:18:18.482-07:00onomatopoeia
See what you made me do? I had to yet...onomatopoeia<br />See what you made me do? I had to yet again check the spelling of this devilish word :-)<br />Nice concoction. And me too: not quite get it.<br />Janine Bolléehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09857073674960699155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-64433750264040727792013-09-13T03:38:51.025-07:002013-09-13T03:38:51.025-07:00ha. nice scat that breaks into a wicked pace in th...ha. nice scat that breaks into a wicked pace in the true stanza....the last line on feeling me now hints at a much larger story to me....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-35367820748660076642013-09-13T03:33:31.219-07:002013-09-13T03:33:31.219-07:00You set up the rhythm in the opening lines ~ I a...You set up the rhythm in the opening lines ~ I am loving the sounds and then the sinking into cushions ~ I say, go with the flow, smiles ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-40552368575295310792013-09-13T02:57:50.446-07:002013-09-13T02:57:50.446-07:00Pure slam poetry. High (hat) five to you!Pure slam poetry. High (hat) five to you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-34602063204604906162013-09-13T00:37:22.682-07:002013-09-13T00:37:22.682-07:00You only half get it?!? I love the onomatopoeia -...You only half get it?!? I love the onomatopoeia - unpronounceable but playable in music...Marina Sofiahttp://findingtimetowrite.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-52817385265246817612013-09-12T21:24:29.245-07:002013-09-12T21:24:29.245-07:00love the play with sounds...and cool wordplay and ...love the play with sounds...and cool wordplay and allits as well..<br />light takes a slight break<br />high stakes step lightly as the<br />light breaks on streetscapes.... ha..i have a tongue in my knot after reading this....very, very cool...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com