Wednesday, 28 August 2013

What Happens in Vegas...

Thrust to calypso
drumbeat bite
bottom lip
bang a gong.

It's on like Donkey Kong.

Edgy premise on the
edge of the precipice
climbing across a
broken moon.

Boom boom boom.

Cryptic crickets
rapidly climbing
fancy pants make-believe
Master of disguise.

Blood shot eyes.

Leveraged beverage
pepper on a cheese souffle
busted with a bad toupee
Turtle wax carjack

Cracka' had a heart attack.


Toads are Getting Listed Today


  1. Oh man...this is just delightful. On like Donkey Kong...there's a phrase I can see myself springing on unsuspecting friends. Yeah, this IS Vegas, as I recall it! Wonderfully imaginative use of my word list.

  2. There's nothing much worse than being busted with a bad toupee. Great language all the way.

  3. From personal experience ... what happens in Vegas stays in Vegas!!! I love every word of this!

  4. Wow, Sam, you have nailed Vegas and the prompt, both of them together. Hilarious and somewhat scary, knowing what awaits the innocent in fancy-pants make believe.

  5. This almost sounds like rap music, which I'd enjoy much more if the lyrics were as good as your poetry.

  6. hahah, it's on like Donkey Kong. that made me think Kracko in your last line (from the Kirby game) which gave a whole nother ending for me. :)

  7. Goodness the ending just cracked me up ~ Have to be careful with the toupee and the souffle ~ Smiles ~


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