Thanks Lacey, Ya I just started a couple of challenges the HAiku heights and and carpe diem. I'm getting busier with my other writing lately for I might not be able to spend the time putting out storis for a while but I can always find time for a haiku :)
Lovely! So many great things going on with this one! Sound repetition between the first and third lines, nasal alliteration in the second, not to mention a nice symmetrical, wave-like structure to the second line - all well done! And of course the meaning is lovely, too. =)
Thank you for the beautiful insight. I was just commenting above how I almost feel my way through these short poems - but there is linguistic reasons why the feel the way they do Thank you :)
Love how the last line connects the cameo dramas of the previous images!
ReplyDelete:) its funny how one word means something different to every one ... thanks Gemma,
ReplyDeleteI wonder if the butterflies don't, in fact, prevent tsunamis, with just a flutter of their wings!
ReplyDeletedepends on the prevailing winds:)
Deletei like your unique take on the prompt. a wonderful haiku.
ReplyDeleteButterfly.
I like it, so you write Haiku's too? :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Lacey, Ya I just started a couple of challenges the HAiku heights and and carpe diem. I'm getting busier with my other writing lately for I might not be able to spend the time putting out storis for a while but I can always find time for a haiku :)
ReplyDeleteWhoosh!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteButterfly
Nice Haiku!
DeleteTHank you Jolle
DeleteNicely crafted
ReplyDeleteWow ... love the interpretation !!!
ReplyDeleteYa it's cool how we all see something different.
DeleteThank You Adriana
ReplyDeleteNice haiku... I love the idea of the butterfly effect... somehow makes sense to me.
ReplyDeleteYa me too - haiku like that isn't its almost a feeling. I have really been enjoy the experience of writing them. COmments mean allot too :)
DeleteLovely! So many great things going on with this one! Sound repetition between the first and third lines, nasal alliteration in the second, not to mention a nice symmetrical, wave-like structure to the second line - all well done! And of course the meaning is lovely, too. =)
ReplyDeleteThank you for the beautiful insight. I was just commenting above how I almost feel my way through these short poems - but there is linguistic reasons why the feel the way they do Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorite thoughts, the butterfly effect. Not knowing, keeps me going. Good one.
ReplyDeleteI love this one... quite succinct. ;-)
ReplyDeleteEliz