Thursday, 11 April 2013

Carpe Diem: Scent of Autum

Another special inspired by our holst at Carpe Diem - He turns 50 this months and celebrates 25 years of haiku. So in honour of Kristjaan I will not stray this time and I will stick to the meaning of the prompt he has intended.



The yellow moon
abundantly we prosper
during harvest time

during harvest time
the family works together
preparing for snow

preparing for snow
we know is sure to follow 
the harvest moon


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5 comments:

  1. joanne11 April 2013 at 07:39

    felt like a lovely documentary of cooperation, abundance, and harvest time.....very well done, Mr. Edge....

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    1. Unknown11 April 2013 at 10:06

      Thanks Joanne it seems odd writing about these things in spring haha

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  2. Anonymous11 April 2013 at 08:12

    I love the turning of words, like the turning of the seasons, the repetition of the last line and turning the haiku into a narrative. Nice.

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  3. Chèvrefeuille11 April 2013 at 22:46

    Nice series Sam. I like that cascading way very much, so thank you for this post and your nice words.

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