Sunday, 14 April 2013

Carpe Diem: Pisces


The last of the Horoscope Haiku with Carpe Diem
It was quite a ride and I have learned allot


Pisces the fish
still waters run the deepest
swift and silent

Fish out of water
always ahead of their time
Alone in a crowd





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17 comments:

  1. Jazzbumpa14 April 2013 at 16:15

    Nicely done, sir.

    You can find my haiku, etc here.

    http://retirementpastels.blogspot.com/

    Economics, politics and snark here.

    http://jazzbumpa.blogspot.com/

    Cheers!
    JzB

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    1. Unknown14 April 2013 at 18:07

      Very nice keep the two separate. I enjoyed reading you snark also.

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  2. Maggie Grace14 April 2013 at 16:57

    Both nicely done, Sam. Still waters run deepest :)

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  3. Anonymous14 April 2013 at 17:43

    Excellent message in well penned haiku ~ ^_^

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    1. Unknown14 April 2013 at 18:08

      Thank you - I got lost in you site for a while what a great mix!

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  4. Anonymous14 April 2013 at 17:47

    A fish out of water won't remain too long, ahead of his time! :)

    A Good Fish Story

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    1. Unknown14 April 2013 at 18:09

      Yes a little hardon the cliche perhaps :)

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  5. Chèvrefeuille15 April 2013 at 03:46

    Very nice haiku. Deep waters run deep. Thank you for noticing that your first link given was corrupted. I have deleted that link.

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    1. Unknown15 April 2013 at 13:44

      Thank you Krisjaan - I have really enjoyed my Carpe Diem journey with you as our captain. I appreciate the time you tame to give us a backstory on the prompt and encouraging me and informing me of Haiku Techniques. I am a fan sor sure :)

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  6. Anonymous15 April 2013 at 05:25

    especially liked "fish out of water"

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  7. Anonymous15 April 2013 at 05:39

    'ahead of their time' - don't they a a fish rots from a head?
    Enjoyed these, thank you for sharing :)

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  8. brudberg15 April 2013 at 13:37

    The fish out of water is sad theme

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    1. Unknown15 April 2013 at 13:41

      Thanks Bjorn, It's suposed to be a metaphor for the feelings of social unease of a Pisces that Kristjaan referred to in the introduction

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  9. Sara McNulty15 April 2013 at 20:52

    These are wonderful!

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