Wednesday, 3 April 2013

Carpe Diem: Gemini


Together they make one
umbilical connection
power of the twins

 Power of the twins
Cain and Abel legacy
divided we fall

Posted by at
Labels: , , , , , , ,

21 comments:

  1. Eliz Frank3 April 2013 at 23:28

    This is lovely... I'm seeing a pattern with tragic twins from a number of our participants. :-)
    Eliz

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown4 April 2013 at 01:29

      Yes the cain and bel came up right way for me when i saw this prompt

      Delete
    2. Unknown4 April 2013 at 14:10

      *Abel

      Delete
  2. Amrit Sinha4 April 2013 at 00:51

    Divided we fall ... so true !!!

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown4 April 2013 at 01:30

      every time - especially against ourselves

      Delete
  3. Chèvrefeuille4 April 2013 at 01:06

    Wonderful cascade haiku Sam. Thank you for sharing.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown4 April 2013 at 01:31

      Thanks Kris. This was a tough onc for me. I really enjy your writing each day thank you for taing the time to put that together for us :)

      Delete
  4. Anonymous4 April 2013 at 01:19

    divided 'we' fall - are you a twin?

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown4 April 2013 at 01:26

      Are you asking me
      to explain my art to you?
      it is what it is

      Delete
  5. Anonymous4 April 2013 at 04:25

    wonderful transitory migration (yes, you moved me!) from being connected in power versus the fall of division.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown4 April 2013 at 23:11

      Transitory migration :) that makes me a syllable engineer.

      Delete
  6. Jazzbumpa4 April 2013 at 06:52

    yes there is entropy in this pair
    moving from order to disorder
    and we all end up as dust

    JzB

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown4 April 2013 at 23:09

      all end up as dust
      and maybe a good dust up
      with some willing twins

      Delete
    2. Unknown4 April 2013 at 23:10

      that's a trophy not entophy

      Delete
  7. joanne4 April 2013 at 09:58

    I think these prompts are difficult, but you have nailed this one...beautifully written with a punch...

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown4 April 2013 at 23:08

      Yes I find the prompt dificult if you aren't close t osomeone woh is that sign. Thnks for the complement..

      Delete
    2. Unknown4 April 2013 at 23:08

      typos arrrrrrrgh.

      Delete
  8. Anonymous4 April 2013 at 12:21

    Murder She Wrote (i like Snoopy wall paper:)

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Unknown4 April 2013 at 23:07

      Yes the snoopy wall paper make me happy :)

      Delete
  9. Maggie Grace4 April 2013 at 13:59

    Powerful haiku!

    ReplyDelete

Thanks for stopping for a visit. You comments are appreciated.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)