Saturday, 24 August 2013

Fib

A
fib.
A lie.
Spiraling
into the eye of
a hurricane - breaking the curl
of a wave that I'm ripping right into the chain
of my own D.N.A. like the
curve of the milky
way back to
the be
gin
ing.
It's fib.
Fall into
the golden rectangle
can never escape it - it chases
me into the gates of insanity. As I am
spiraling out of control. I
try to regain my
composure
I count
to
one

*******

Toads are using the Fibonacci Sequence for poetry - and it's cool.





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15 comments:

  1. Grace24 August 2013 at 16:08

    A fib will bring you spiralling out of control ~ I like the be/gin/ing ~

    That video is so cool.....wow, thanks for sharing it ~

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  2. L. Edgar Otto24 August 2013 at 16:20

    Deep into the symmetry of our DNA the golden ratio indeed... to which as in the glass bead game of Hesse over philosophic time as the fourth dimension that ratio is the key unit of measure. In it we find a center and a closure and cycles in cycles repeated again to which our sanity will stand out against some forever falling with wings of creativity.

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  3. hedgewitch24 August 2013 at 16:23

    I really like the very cool spiral feel to this, both in the message and just the way the language swells and retracts--especially liked the lines about D.N.A. and the milky way, with their internal rhyme. Thanks so much for joining in Sam.

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  4. stephen Hayes24 August 2013 at 16:39

    I count to one! Ha. Very nice.

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  5. Unknown24 August 2013 at 17:02

    wow nice ...loved the video you posted as well ....gotta be a Creator when considering that :)

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  6. Helen24 August 2013 at 17:34

    Love the circular motion, the feeling of existence in a whirligig. Delightful ...

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  7. Ella24 August 2013 at 19:15

    Clever! Wow, we kind spiraled in the same direction-just a wee bit!
    I enjoyed yours :D

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  8. jabblog25 August 2013 at 03:06

    A lie is a more serious fib and how it can escalate, as you wrote so eloquently.

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  9. Marian25 August 2013 at 07:38

    hah, back to the
    be
    gin
    ning

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  10. Anonymous25 August 2013 at 08:50

    good find on the vid, Sam, and a nice twisting in on the FIB ~

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  11. Kay L. Davies25 August 2013 at 10:12

    Oooh, "I count to one" is scary, Sam.
    K

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  12. humbird25 August 2013 at 15:46

    Like your play with words! Fun!

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  13. Susan25 August 2013 at 18:21

    I think I may have ridden the same wave once or twice and had to count to one to stabilize again.

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  14. Susie Clevenger25 August 2013 at 21:22

    Fibs can definitely spiral out of control. We have all been there

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  15. Sherry Blue Sky26 August 2013 at 10:55

    This is hilarious and I am grinning from ear to ear.

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