tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post6787834686646731009..comments2023-12-17T02:18:16.752-08:00Comments on Collateral Damn-Edge - The Creative Writing of Sam Edge: No EscapeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-21198444600613410022013-10-15T17:18:56.509-07:002013-10-15T17:18:56.509-07:00...licking its black lips (oh, that is just NICE) ......licking its black lips (oh, that is just NICE) and the ending... Well, your poem doesn't let up! Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-73964301074102668892013-10-14T16:40:33.188-07:002013-10-14T16:40:33.188-07:00thanks kay back = black :)thanks kay back = black :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-9553047356516731592013-10-13T22:12:40.764-07:002013-10-13T22:12:40.764-07:00The secret debts that we dare not acknowledge, eve...The secret debts that we dare not acknowledge, even to ourselves.<br />Excellent, Sam. <br />K<br />PS—Small typo, first word, fourth line.Kay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-40684548329037009642013-10-13T22:06:45.270-07:002013-10-13T22:06:45.270-07:00Sam I felt like we just ran a scary a thon!
Damn ...Sam I felt like we just ran a scary a thon! <br />Damn good! Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-42239631378370182462013-10-13T19:25:31.134-07:002013-10-13T19:25:31.134-07:00Wow, this is powerful, Sam. Especially the black l...Wow, this is powerful, Sam. Especially the black lips and the cold steel smile. Wowzers!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-15606256802089349892013-10-13T19:15:26.165-07:002013-10-13T19:15:26.165-07:00Eek! This got creepier by the line! I agree with G...Eek! This got creepier by the line! I agree with Grace-that ending sent shivers up my spine!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-18183418339424795622013-10-13T18:40:45.109-07:002013-10-13T18:40:45.109-07:00Yikes on the ending, secrets debts are owed ~ Ca...Yikes on the ending, secrets debts are owed ~ Can only imagine what happens if one is unable to pay them back ~ <br /><br />Liking the darker looping verses ~ Thanks for linking up to Real Toads ~ <br /><br />Happy Thanksgiving ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com