tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post2203188616972622052..comments2023-12-17T02:18:16.752-08:00Comments on Collateral Damn-Edge - The Creative Writing of Sam Edge: Thirty-threeAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-79938565174481739042013-03-17T22:26:10.556-07:002013-03-17T22:26:10.556-07:00Hey thanks for your input Atreyee -interesting. T...Hey thanks for your input Atreyee -interesting. Thank-you for taking the time :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-71763027723664527122013-03-17T22:02:58.168-07:002013-03-17T22:02:58.168-07:00I like the second one as well-though unlike all ot...I like the second one as well-though unlike all others,not being a Christian,I did not see the "cross" but what appealed to me was the kind of ominous ending after a pregnant pause in the last two lines ,which somehow was missing in the "prose" format.My apologies if I come across as silly but am not conversant with "structure" or other "literary" quantifiers(?)-just went with the feel Sam.Whichever form you choose,love the creepy feeling -one keeps expecting some thing out of a horror film-reminded me of Poe's "The monkey's paw":-)Atreyeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15400190416839538182noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-37287198362417913242013-03-17T15:54:56.404-07:002013-03-17T15:54:56.404-07:00Ya you bet Ann thanks :)
Ya you bet Ann thanks :)<br /><br />Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-74837100824135134932013-03-17T15:04:54.420-07:002013-03-17T15:04:54.420-07:00good post. What will be is a mystery and certainly...good post. What will be is a mystery and certainly unpredictable.Ann Bennetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759967601352382204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-34965980394702602452013-03-17T14:27:36.796-07:002013-03-17T14:27:36.796-07:00Thanks :)Thanks :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-14787260020472046572013-03-17T13:41:17.679-07:002013-03-17T13:41:17.679-07:00Whoah... this is great! Whoah... this is great! Silversound7http://www.writelovelive.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-77893649958867579932013-03-17T12:40:45.246-07:002013-03-17T12:40:45.246-07:00Yes I wondered if the formatting really helps or d...Yes I wondered if the formatting really helps or does it take way from the words because i agree that stand up on their own. I was also a little worried about the subject matter there can be allot of controversy with old JC.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-39078842674875891032013-03-17T12:38:30.657-07:002013-03-17T12:38:30.657-07:00THanks I wondered if it helps or hurts I appreciat...THanks I wondered if it helps or hurts I appreciate the comment :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-13051219583241240462013-03-17T11:58:40.251-07:002013-03-17T11:58:40.251-07:00The Spanish Inquisition?
Ha ha, couldn't resis...The Spanish Inquisition?<br />Ha ha, couldn't resist.<br />Very disquieting piece.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-77561012612358746802013-03-17T05:38:29.436-07:002013-03-17T05:38:29.436-07:00So much truth in the last statement - no matter on...So much truth in the last statement - no matter one's expectations.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-15017904158897100102013-03-16T15:03:11.827-07:002013-03-16T15:03:11.827-07:00Wonderfully written piece - mysterious and a littl...Wonderfully written piece - mysterious and a little disturbing. And yes, I really like the structure you've used. Excellent job!Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10380277216952785078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-34999855518246530292013-03-16T13:01:12.590-07:002013-03-16T13:01:12.590-07:00This is great - with or without the picture, actua...This is great - with or without the picture, actually. "But no one expected this" - such a sense of creepy foreboding, but a little tongue-in-cheek, too. Great job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-69285239990522055322013-03-16T12:08:30.997-07:002013-03-16T12:08:30.997-07:00THanks BoTHanks BoAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-22446396426867614062013-03-16T12:08:17.150-07:002013-03-16T12:08:17.150-07:00Ha ha. Its on topic for the new pope this month to...Ha ha. Its on topic for the new pope this month too.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-16552980122155780922013-03-16T12:07:40.512-07:002013-03-16T12:07:40.512-07:00It was definitely unexpected,It was definitely unexpected,Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-52354474102124636272013-03-16T12:06:35.808-07:002013-03-16T12:06:35.808-07:00Ya it was cool the way it worked out. I had the id...Ya it was cool the way it worked out. I had the idea in my head ad I write out ince - exactly 33 words frist shot. There is something magic about this word combination. I arranged in in few different patterns and it always worked. I 'm happy with the way it ended up.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-74120006545404349562013-03-16T12:03:35.851-07:002013-03-16T12:03:35.851-07:00Thank you sir.Thank you sir.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-19964212237727097752013-03-16T12:03:17.451-07:002013-03-16T12:03:17.451-07:00Thanks rosanna.Thanks rosanna.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-18764589459974957142013-03-16T12:02:50.168-07:002013-03-16T12:02:50.168-07:00Thanks - it was cool how the words lined up.Thanks - it was cool how the words lined up.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-62372515147667339572013-03-16T12:01:54.837-07:002013-03-16T12:01:54.837-07:00Well I'm not sure what he came back as but som...Well I'm not sure what he came back as but some really messed up happened because this is a CREEPY photo. <br /><br />Thanks for you input. Steven.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-78005200379414928772013-03-16T11:49:00.536-07:002013-03-16T11:49:00.536-07:00This is beautiful! Very good.This is beautiful! Very good.Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-35288892948565879252013-03-16T10:58:49.964-07:002013-03-16T10:58:49.964-07:00Nicely done, it took me a minute to grasp, (yes, I...Nicely done, it took me a minute to grasp, (yes, I'm all slow, it comes from age) and I like the cross. Reneehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00955772837133239769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-9742927823599388952013-03-16T08:52:42.634-07:002013-03-16T08:52:42.634-07:00:)
no one expected . . . yup, there is that.:)<br />no one expected . . . yup, there is that.barbarahttp://purplemoose.kenaiwriter.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-6256664514122874142013-03-16T07:44:36.825-07:002013-03-16T07:44:36.825-07:00I love this, love the cross shape of the words and...I love this, love the cross shape of the words and, obviously, the words themselves. Well done.Sandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03946042707794806737noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9190771526894911122.post-47743861420446566572013-03-16T06:44:12.576-07:002013-03-16T06:44:12.576-07:00Interesting. The form of the poem is nifty.Interesting. The form of the poem is nifty.Draughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09778248789422474009noreply@blogger.com